[Grammar] Would you mind to correct my text?

[Jay.]

Hello,
it would be very friendly if someone corrected my text ;3!
Thanks~

Hello Peter!
While I was surfing the internet, I accidentaly found your website. There are some interesting informations.
I think that skydiving must be fantastic. It’s like flying, isn’t it?
Would you mind to answer some questions?
First of all, I would like to know if everyone can go skydiving. What are the skills I need to go skydiving?
And additionally it’d be interesting to how long you have been doing this activity.

By the way, I also really enjoy biking even if it’s not a mountain bike.
I don’t do as much sport as you do but I hope I’ll find the time to do.

Have a nice day,
Jay.

 

[tedmc]

Re: Would you mind to correct my text ;*;?

[h=2]Hello,[/h]

it would be very friendly if someone corrected my text ;3!
I would appreciate it if someone corrects my writing.

Thanks~

Hello Peter!
While I was surfing the internet, I accidentaly found your website.
There are some interesting informations.
Information is uncountable, so: There is some interesting information.
I think that skydiving must be fantastic. It’s like flying, isn’t it?
Would you mind to answer(answering) some questions?
First of all, I would like to know if everyone can go skydiving.
What are the skills I need to go skydiving?
What skills do I need to go skydiving?
And additionally, it’d be interesting to know how long you have been doing this activity.

By the way, I also really enjoy biking even if it’s not on a mountain bike.
I don’t do as much sport as you do but I hope I’ll find the time to do it.

Have a nice day,
Jay.​

 

[Jay.]

Re: Would you mind to correct my text ;*;?

Thank you very much !

But I've learned that I can't put a gerund after would. Could you please explain this to me ;*;?

Would you mind to answer(answering) some questions?

 

[tedmc]

Re: Would you mind to correct my text ;*;?

Thank you very much !

But I've learned that I can't put a gerund after would. Could you please explain this to me ;*;?

The gerund is after "mind", not "would".

The gerund form is normally used after "would you mind".

http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/67476/would-you-mind-to-do-something

 

[teechar]

Re: Would you mind to correct my text ;*;?

Hello Peter,
While I was surfing the internet, I accidentally found your website which I note [STRIKE]There are[/STRIKE] has some interesting information.
I think that skydiving must be fantastic. It's like flying, isn’t it?
Would you mind [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] answering some questions, please?
First of all, I would like to know if everyone can go skydiving. Also, what are the skills I need to go skydiving?
[STRIKE]And additionally[/STRIKE] Finally, it'd be interesting to know how long you have been doing this activity.

By the way, I also really enjoy biking even [STRIKE]if it’s not a mountain[/STRIKE] on an ordinary bike.
I don't do as much sport as you do, but I hope I'll find the time to do so in the future.

Have a nice day,
Jay.

.

 

[Rover_KE]

Re: Would you mind to correct my text ;*;?

Thank you very much. You need a full stop (period) at the end of a sentence — not a home-made emoticon.

But I've learned that I can't put a gerund after 'would'. Could you please explain this to me?

Please stop using home-made emoticons. If you want to insert a smiley, click on :-D and choose from those available.

You can certainly use a gerund after 'would you mind'. In fact, 'Would you mind to answer?' is wrong.