[General] WPS -Approval Delay - Draft Letter

[Kumar Nadimuthu]

Could you please check this draft letter?

This is in reference to our submittal of revised WPS (Welding Procedure Specification), we await your response immediate. We want to qualify our welders based on approved WPS. Any further delay will affect our Double Tee Slab welding activities and overall project progress for Building units.

Kindly do the needful at the earliest.

 

[emsr2d2]

It's too late for me to comment on most of it (yawn!) but note that unless you are writing to another speaker of Indian English, don't use "Kindly do the needful". No other variant uses it.

 

[teechar]

Could you please check this draft letter?

This is in reference to our [STRIKE]submittal[/STRIKE] submission of the revised WPS (Welding Procedure Specification) for which we are awaiting your [STRIKE]response[/STRIKE] immediate response. We want [STRIKE]to qualify[/STRIKE] our welders to qualify based on the approved WPS. Any further delay will affect our Double Tee Slab welding activities and overall project progress for Building units.

[STRIKE]Kindly do the needful at the earliest.[/STRIKE]

I don't understand what you mean by "building units."