John012
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- Jan 30, 2022
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- Academic
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- German
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- Austria
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Hey,
I hope i am at the right place here, i am currently writing a study, and have a question about 2 sentences..
Is this correct, or how would it be better?
"XYZ can occur after severe YZX. Its incidence had been reported in the literature ranging from 0.5 - 45%. This variety could be due to incorrect diagnosis regarding patients who developed a XXX. Furthermore, the varying incidences could be explained by inconclusive international diagnostic criteria."
and
"The results by international studies dealing with the predictive risk factors that could lead to a XXX remain inconclusive."
Thank you very much!
Flo
I hope i am at the right place here, i am currently writing a study, and have a question about 2 sentences..
Is this correct, or how would it be better?
"XYZ can occur after severe YZX. Its incidence had been reported in the literature ranging from 0.5 - 45%. This variety could be due to incorrect diagnosis regarding patients who developed a XXX. Furthermore, the varying incidences could be explained by inconclusive international diagnostic criteria."
and
"The results by international studies dealing with the predictive risk factors that could lead to a XXX remain inconclusive."
Thank you very much!
Flo
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