You need to reduce your body fat percentage so that your muscles can come out from un

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You need to reduce your body fat percentage so that your muscles can come out from under the layer of fat.

Is my sentence correct and natural?
 

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You need to reduce your body fat [STRIKE]percentage[/STRIKE] so that your muscles can be more prominent. [STRIKE]come out from under the layer of fat.[/STRIKE]
Try that.
 

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What about:
You need to reduce your body fat to allow your muscles to show up?
 
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