[General] Z-Facade

[Dicktionary]

My colleague made up a slogan for our company.
I just feel not O.K with this one. I personally don't like this one... anyway.

'Z-Facade is everything for a facade'
Z-Facade is a company offering related services for a exterior.

What would you guys suggest?


And the problem is that this colleague is a kind of sensitive one.
Plz let me escape from this situation.

 

[Rover_KE]

Re: Is there any problem with this one? I don't feel like this is quiet O.K.

Are you really in Spain?

If not, please correct your profile information.

 

[Dicktionary]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

I was not aware of the mistake I made.
Corrected so... thanks buddy.

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

I was not aware of the mistake I had made.
I have corrected it. [STRIKE]so...[/STRIKE] Thanks. [STRIKE]buddy.[/STRIKE]

See above.

 

[teechar]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

Try:
Z-Facade: everything you need in a facade.
or
Z-Facade: your exteriors specialists.
or
Z-Facade: your trusted exteriors specialists.

 

[Dicktionary]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

Thanks a lot. However I feel like what my colleague intended to say was like 'Z-facade offers everythingt the people and the society related to or focused on exteriors issues.'[Just explanation]
Anyway I appreciate your valuable creative writing. Have a good one:>

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

Thanks a lot. However​, I feel [STRIKE]like[/STRIKE] that what my colleague intended to say was something like 'Z-facade offers [STRIKE]everythingt[/STRIKE] everything [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] that people and [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] society [STRIKE]related[/STRIKE] relate to or [STRIKE]focused[/STRIKE] focus on regarding exteriors issues.' (space needed here)[Just an explanation.]
Anyway, I appreciate your valuable creative writing. Have a good one. [STRIKE]:>[/STRIKE]

See my corrections above. No matter what message your colleague was trying to get across, he/she needs to remember that slogans need to be short and snappy.

 

[Dicktionary]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

:< Thanks Mr. teacher~ You have not a 'bad' day~~! I've put a sentence like 'Z-facade offers everything to the people and the society related to or focused on all those exteriors issues.' though. Has this one too? Too much unstable this website is. [Master Yoda, You teacher hate this guy very probably? Don't ya?]

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

[STRIKE]:<[/STRIKE] Don't try to make your own emoticons.

Thanks. [STRIKE]Mr. teacher~[/STRIKE] Don't refer to everyone here as "Mr". We are not all male. Also "Mr teacher" is not used. "Mr" is followed by a surname. Sentences don't end with that squiggly line you used.

You have not a 'bad' day. [STRIKE]~~! [/STRIKE] I don't know what you mean by this. Are you trying to say that you hope I don't have a bad day? Again, squiggly lines which mean nothing appear in your post.


I've put a sentence like 'Z-facade offers everything to the people and the society related to or focused on all those exteriors issues.' though. That's the sentence I suggested but not as a slogan.

Has this one too? This is not grammatical. What do you mean?

Too much unstable this website is. Good example of Yoda-speak.

[Master Yoda, You teacher hate this guy very probably, don't [STRIKE]ya[/STRIKE] you?] Is this addressed to Yoda or to me?

See above.

 

[teechar]

Re: Z-Facade O.K I corrected.

I've put a sentence like 'Z-facade offers everything to the people and the society related to or focused on all those exteriors issues.'

No, that doesn't work. Are you trying to make a slogan or something else?
Also, please do not use an automatic translator such as Google Translate.