Silverobama
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- Aug 8, 2010
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- Student or Learner
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- Chinese
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- China
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- China
Hi.
I am trying to improve my writing skills by using different words and the following is a new attempt. The context is that I met a very nice middle-aged woman once and we had dinner together. I was seeing the photos and reading the things she posted in one of the apps we both use. After seeing those photos and reading those articles, I wrote to her:
Even though we've only met once, I am just wondering why such an elegant woman like you could possess so many best qualities. You're talented and intelligent. I'm also impressed by your versatility. * Don't stay up too late. Good night. **
*: I said she's versatile because she can do yoga. She's a host. She's a teacher of a local kindergarten and can dance and sing. Also, she's a wonderful housewife.
**: I don't think the last two sentences are coherent with the former sentences, but she likes staying up too late. So I add it to be a gentle reminder.
Please help me with my short paragraph in italics.
I am trying to improve my writing skills by using different words and the following is a new attempt. The context is that I met a very nice middle-aged woman once and we had dinner together. I was seeing the photos and reading the things she posted in one of the apps we both use. After seeing those photos and reading those articles, I wrote to her:
Even though we've only met once, I am just wondering why such an elegant woman like you could possess so many best qualities. You're talented and intelligent. I'm also impressed by your versatility. * Don't stay up too late. Good night. **
*: I said she's versatile because she can do yoga. She's a host. She's a teacher of a local kindergarten and can dance and sing. Also, she's a wonderful housewife.
**: I don't think the last two sentences are coherent with the former sentences, but she likes staying up too late. So I add it to be a gentle reminder.
Please help me with my short paragraph in italics.
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