Again many thanks for your advice. The feedback you have provided me will definitely help me to correct myself. If everyone is like you, I would have corrected myself long time ago. Really appreciate your help. Please see my full contents below. I have followed your instructions. It would be greatly appreciated if you could give a quick check. And more advice/feedback on area where I want to more focus on. Many thanks again.
"The website site for CHALLENGE LIFE is developed, but there is no contents at this stage.
As you can see, there are 9 images/icons on the home page each one representing one of our services.
Clicking on this icons will take you to respective service page
s. As I mentioned before, these pages need some contents, and I hope all of you got a print copy of the page which is relevant to you or accountable for providing contents.
So, when you ready with the contents please let me know, I can assist you in uploading to the webiste.
We can make our website as a first point of contact for our customers and they can come to us if they can’t find anything on the website. So, the more we put the contents on the website the less we need to interfere with them.
It would be good if we can make this happen ASAP.
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See my amendments to your post. Please follow the rules of written English:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".
- Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Do not use a capital letter after a comma unless you are using a proper noun.