Please correct the below if it is wrong
"There are 9 images or icons on the home page , each represents our services."
Thanks in advance
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That's only correct if each individual icon represents all of your services. I doubt that's true. I assume that one icon represents one service, another icon represents another service etc etc.
There are nine images/icons on the home page - each one represents a different service we offer.
There are nine images/icons on the home page - each one representing one of our services.
Many [STRIKE]thnaks[/STRIKE] thanks, it was so helpful.
See my amendments to your post. Please follow the rules of written English:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".
- Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Do not use a capital letter after a comma unless you are using a proper noun.
Again many thanks for your advice. The feedback you have provided me will definitely help me to correct myself. If everyone is like you, I would have corrected myself long time ago. Really appreciate your help. Please see my full contents below. I have followed your instructions. It would be greatly appreciated if you could give a quick check. And more advice/feedback on area where I want to more focus on. Many thanks again.
"The website site for CHALLENGE LIFE is developed, but there is no [STRIKE]contents[/STRIKE] content (or "are no contents) at this stage.
As you can see, there are [STRIKE]9[/STRIKE] nine images/icons on the home page, each one representing one of our services.
Clicking on [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] these icons will take you to the respective service pages. As I mentioned before, these pages need some [STRIKE]contents[/STRIKE] content, and I hope all of you got a print copy of the page which is relevant to you or [STRIKE]accountable[/STRIKE] for which you are responsible for providing [STRIKE]contents[/STRIKE] content.
So, when you are ready with the [STRIKE]contents[/STRIKE] content, please let me know and I can assist you in uploading it to the [STRIKE]webiste[/STRIKE] website.
We can make our website [STRIKE]as[/STRIKE] a first point of contact for our customers and they can come to us if they can’t find [STRIKE]anything[/STRIKE] something on the website. So, the more [STRIKE]we put the[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]contents[/STRIKE] content we put on the website, the less we need to interfere (I don't think this is the verb you want) with them (who is "them"?).
It would be good if we can make this happen ASAP.
Many thanks again. Thanks is not enough for this help, but I don't know a better word than this to say thanks. I wish if I had you as my teacher.
A big [STRIKE]road[/STRIKE] block [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] to my career is my English. [STRIKE]Everyday[/STRIKE] Every day I [STRIKE]am[/STRIKE] try[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] my best to improve it. Without [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] proper [STRIKE]guide[/STRIKE] guidance it is very difficult. Poverty prevented me [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] from studying English when I was a child, and now [STRIKE]too much[/STRIKE] all my responsibilities [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are preventing me. Again many thanks for your help.
The sentence I wanted to say was "So, the more content we put on the website, the less we need to talk with our customers."
Pleas correct the above if it is wrong.