Edo Walhalla
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According to you, it's the following example good to say in written English or not?
I would like to use two invented people to make a good example but I don't know whether is good or not.
I'll help myself with two fake students, Jonh and Mark. Jonh goes to school everyday and he follows every classes. Mark is always at home and he skips schools. Probably, Jonh's marks would be higher than Mark's one, ever if Mark studies everyday more than Jonh. This happens because Jonh goes to school amd he pays attention to the teacher and this is more important than study alone at home.
Thanks in advance
I would like to use two invented people to make a good example but I don't know whether is good or not.
I'll help myself with two fake students, Jonh and Mark. Jonh goes to school everyday and he follows every classes. Mark is always at home and he skips schools. Probably, Jonh's marks would be higher than Mark's one, ever if Mark studies everyday more than Jonh. This happens because Jonh goes to school amd he pays attention to the teacher and this is more important than study alone at home.
Thanks in advance