motico
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- May 6, 2010
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- Hebrew
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Please, check if the following passage is grammatically correct. Thanks!
**This is a translated passage. It is neither intended to express a political opinion nor start a political discussion. I'm just interested in the language. **
The harsh scenes of violence at the hands of the government, which have flooded the media, have severely hurt the prime minister's religious feelings. Like many other believers, for whom the religious tradition is the guiding principle, he can't afford sitting idle while across his border infidels are slaughtering observant believers. The anger that has seized him, as a result of that and due to news that soldiers had harmed the dignity of women, was the same anger that burst out of him in January 2009, when he saw what (a name of a country) did in the (a name of a place). Unfortunately, he has found out that the president isn't better than (a name of a country) and that he has done in his country what (a name of a country) had done in the (a name of a place) and perhaps even worse. His words on the regime in (a name of a country) have reflected his feeling that the president's regime has totally lost its legitimacy.
**This is a translated passage. It is neither intended to express a political opinion nor start a political discussion. I'm just interested in the language. **
The harsh scenes of violence at the hands of the government, which have flooded the media, have severely hurt the prime minister's religious feelings. Like many other believers, for whom the religious tradition is the guiding principle, he can't afford sitting idle while across his border infidels are slaughtering observant believers. The anger that has seized him, as a result of that and due to news that soldiers had harmed the dignity of women, was the same anger that burst out of him in January 2009, when he saw what (a name of a country) did in the (a name of a place). Unfortunately, he has found out that the president isn't better than (a name of a country) and that he has done in his country what (a name of a country) had done in the (a name of a place) and perhaps even worse. His words on the regime in (a name of a country) have reflected his feeling that the president's regime has totally lost its legitimacy.