[General] Notice of Receipt

[peter2124]

Hello, Please advise me if the heading & phrasing is correct, im not to sure if it sounds ok,

Thanks :-D


Notice of receipt,

The undersigned certify that I received on …………at………..hrs from....... the following items in excellent condition.

 

[bhaisahab]

Hello, Please advise me if the heading & phrasing is correct, im not to sure if it sounds ok,

Thanks :-D


Notice of receipt,

The undersigned certify that I received on …………at………..hrs from....... the following items in excellent condition.

It might be better as: "I, the undersigned, certify that I..."

 

[peter2124]

Thank you bhaisahad it deffinitely sounds better!