With only ten minutes of my lunchbreak remaing, I have some spare time on my hands, in which I can write a few sentences.
Hearing my alarm clock go off at 7 O'clock this morning seems a life time ago now. I only had time for one cup of coffee and a slice of toast, before having to get into my car and drive to work. The kids were pretty well behaved, and as always, we wished each other well before I left the house. My wife, Betty, gave me a huge kiss and asked me to try to be home a little earlier than usual. This was because she is going out with her sister tonight. At work, the telephone has only rang a handfull of times, but that is not to say I have not been busy. This afternoon, I am hoping, should fly past. I can then look forward to the weekend and a few days off. But until then it's back to work.
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Hearing my alarm clock go off at 7 O'clock this morning
, seems a life time ago now.I only had time for [STRIKE]
one[/STRIKE] a cup of coffee and[STRIKE]
a [/STRIKE]slice of toast, before having to get into my car and drive to work. (
not consistant)
The kids were pretty well behaved and as always, we wished each other well
, before I left the house. (
Try not to use the same word twice in one sentence)
My wife, Betty, gave me a huge kiss and asked me to try to be home a little earlier than usual [STRIKE]
. This was [/STRIKE]because she [STRIKE]
is going [/STRIKE] plans to go out with her sister tonight.
At work, the telephone has only rang a handfull of times
this morning , but that is not to say I have not been busy. [STRIKE]
This afternoon, I am hoping, should fly past.[/STRIKE]( re arrange) I hope this afternoon will fly past; then I can then look forward to the weekend and a few days off
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Can anyone correct for me please?