wolfand
Member
- Joined
- Nov 24, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- Australia
I got confused when I have to omit repeated words, as follows.
1. However 70% of over 49yr olds study for interest in comparison to 18% studying for career reasons in that age group.
-In above sentence, "of over 49yr olds" is omitted. Do native speakers understand that kind of omissions? Is the above sentence correct?
2. The heart attack rate in women aged 65 and higher is found to be three times greater than in women aged 40-65.
-Also, above sentence omitted many things before "in women aged 40-65."
Is the above sentence correct?
1. However 70% of over 49yr olds study for interest in comparison to 18% studying for career reasons in that age group.
-In above sentence, "of over 49yr olds" is omitted. Do native speakers understand that kind of omissions? Is the above sentence correct?
2. The heart attack rate in women aged 65 and higher is found to be three times greater than in women aged 40-65.
-Also, above sentence omitted many things before "in women aged 40-65."
Is the above sentence correct?