lo3ti
Member
- Joined
- Jan 15, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Saudi Arabia
- Current Location
- UK
hey,
can any teacher correct my mistakes in this paragraph :
On day, while I was cutting onions to put it into my sausage sandwich, suddenly I cut my finger by a sharp knife. My finger started bleeding a lot of blood, quickly I wear my clothes and went to the nearest hospital from my house, I arrived to the hospital at 8:10 pm it was crowded and there were a lot of people which have a dangerous injuries, so I had to wait and tie my wound to stopped the bleed. After half an hour exactly at 8:40 pm I met the doctor, he asked me about if I want to stitch my finger or not, so I told him that my wound doesn’t require stitches so I don’t want stitch after that he put over my finger a paste its very useful couse after 2 weeks my wound got well ..
thnx to anybody wants help me
can any teacher correct my mistakes in this paragraph :
On day, while I was cutting onions to put it into my sausage sandwich, suddenly I cut my finger by a sharp knife. My finger started bleeding a lot of blood, quickly I wear my clothes and went to the nearest hospital from my house, I arrived to the hospital at 8:10 pm it was crowded and there were a lot of people which have a dangerous injuries, so I had to wait and tie my wound to stopped the bleed. After half an hour exactly at 8:40 pm I met the doctor, he asked me about if I want to stitch my finger or not, so I told him that my wound doesn’t require stitches so I don’t want stitch after that he put over my finger a paste its very useful couse after 2 weeks my wound got well ..
thnx to anybody wants help me