[Grammar] How would you help your colleagues

[Ferdie11]

Hello,

Can help me check if there's grammar error in the sentences below.


Q. How would you help your colleagues?
A. I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example -- if I kept a positive attitude and stayed excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am they will have a tendency to become excited as well.


Many thanks.

 

[bhaisahab]

Hello,

Can help me check if there's grammar error in the sentences below.


Q. How would you help your colleagues?
A. I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example. If I kept a positive attitude and stayed excited about my own job, they would see how enthusiastic I am and have a tendency to become excited as well.


Many thanks.

Bhai.

 

[Ferdie11]

Bhai.

Thanks so much, Bhai. What about this one?

I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example – I would keep a positive attitude and stay excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am they will have a tendency to become excited as well.

 

[freezeframe]

Thanks so much, Bhai. What about this one?

I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example – I would keep a positive attitude and stay excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am, they will have a tendency to become excited as well.

If the dependent clause comes before the main clause, it must be followed by a comma.