16) Student’s invocation

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Atchan

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I translated this pray from a book
16) Student’s invocation​
My God who raised the heavens. I am wishing you.
Save my religion from the temptation distresses.
Strengthen me during study time with hardworking and intelligent.
Save my father and mother and all my friends.
Grant my country a glory and high.
Oh! Wealthy, accept my pray.
 

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Atchan, it's just about as ungrammatical as it could be.

Only the fourth line makes sense.

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And now, if there are mistakes please show me
Oh! My God who lift up the heavens, I am wishing you to save my religion from the temptation distresses and to strengthen me during study time with hardworking and intelligent. Please, save my father and mother and all my friends. Grant my country a glory and high. Oh! Wealthy, accept my pray.
 

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Oh! My God who lifts up the heavens, I am wishing for you to save my religion from the distress of temptation and to strengthen me during my study time with hardwork[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] and intelligence. Please save my father and mother and all my friends. Grant my country a glory and high. Oh! Wealthy, accept my prayer.

I don't know what you mean by 'high'. Is your God wealthy?

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