Bassim
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- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?
1.Her dress hiked up to her thighs, the woman waded across the river.
I am wondering if my sentence is correct as it is or maybe it needs the preposition "with" like this?
2. With her dress hiked up to her thighs, the woman waded across the river.
1.Her dress hiked up to her thighs, the woman waded across the river.
I am wondering if my sentence is correct as it is or maybe it needs the preposition "with" like this?
2. With her dress hiked up to her thighs, the woman waded across the river.