jmb95
New member
- Joined
- Feb 5, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Spain
- Current Location
- Spain
I'm applying for an internship to study a master's in a U.S. university to specialize in graphics programming and simulation.
I'm from Spain, and they rate the SoP from 1 to 8. If I don't get 8 points I get disqualified because of the competitivity and low total number of granted internships.
I will share this statement with my professors too but I would really appreciate some help online. What do you think about my writing skills? Please have a look and tell me if it is boring, or if you honestly like it. The maximum length is 3 pages, so If you find any useless and generic area I will delete it. All criticism is welcomed.
I've already been told that my Universities section is weak, that I need to say something special about each one. What do you think about that?
Btw, the link in the document is not available yet.
Thanks in advance.
I'm from Spain, and they rate the SoP from 1 to 8. If I don't get 8 points I get disqualified because of the competitivity and low total number of granted internships.
I will share this statement with my professors too but I would really appreciate some help online. What do you think about my writing skills? Please have a look and tell me if it is boring, or if you honestly like it. The maximum length is 3 pages, so If you find any useless and generic area I will delete it. All criticism is welcomed.
I've already been told that my Universities section is weak, that I need to say something special about each one. What do you think about that?
Btw, the link in the document is not available yet.
Thanks in advance.