Yanko
New member
- Joined
- Jul 16, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Russian Federation
Dear teachers,
I'm trying to write short songs in English but I'm not always sure about it in terms of grammar and how natural it sounds for an English speakers.
It is not so critical to me that if it make sense for everyone and have rhymes but anyways I would like to hear your your opinion.
What can you tell me about next lyrics:
"Years passing, wind blows in my head
Nothing matters now and just let it be as it is.
Uncertainty is awful and beautiful at the same time
It is just a way of living and this is not a crime.
When I'll get along with destiny?
Where I am gonna find my own space?
Whether here or any other place
I am ready pack my suitcase"
Thank you!
I'm trying to write short songs in English but I'm not always sure about it in terms of grammar and how natural it sounds for an English speakers.
It is not so critical to me that if it make sense for everyone and have rhymes but anyways I would like to hear your your opinion.
What can you tell me about next lyrics:
"Years passing, wind blows in my head
Nothing matters now and just let it be as it is.
Uncertainty is awful and beautiful at the same time
It is just a way of living and this is not a crime.
When I'll get along with destiny?
Where I am gonna find my own space?
Whether here or any other place
I am ready pack my suitcase"
Thank you!