alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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He walked in the house, hoping his mom hadn't had dinner yet. "Ma, I bought the best salami in the world, you better be hungry" he said, enthusiastically. The house was silent. "Ma! Where are you?" he shouted. No answer. Her bedroom was empty. He found her in the bathroom. The sickly white of the tile floor had turned dark with her blood. It looked black in the dim light. She was staring at him silently, the tiny veins in her eyes swollen. He didn't even check her pulse as John was consumed with hate at that moment. Hate for the world and for his mom. She had chosen to abandon him when things got tough.
He walked in the house, hoping his mom hadn't had dinner yet. "Ma, I bought the best salami in the world, you better be hungry" he said, enthusiastically. The house was silent. "Ma! Where are you?" he shouted. No answer. Her bedroom was empty. He found her in the bathroom. The sickly white of the tile floor had turned dark with her blood. It looked black in the dim light. She was staring at him silently, the tiny veins in her eyes swollen. He didn't even check her pulse as John was consumed with hate at that moment. Hate for the world and for his mom. She had chosen to abandon him when things got tough.