alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct? Can I stylistically improve it?
The lavenders were rippling in the soft wind. Jane lay amid the field, the breeze caressing her face. The purple of the meadow merged with the purple of her blouse.
The lavenders were rippling in the soft wind. Jane lay amid the field, the breeze caressing her face. The purple of the meadow merged with the purple of her blouse.