Bad English Guy
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- Feb 4, 2017
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- Finnish
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- Finland
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I don't know is business writing a right term. But I want to become blogger, copywriter etc. I will appreciate to receive feedback of this writing. I have put it already through different text analyzing softwares. So I wish to get ideas how to make this writing more creative and professional. Thank you.
Since the childhood, I have experienced a lot of negativity around me. Always somebody has the opinion of how we should look, act and be. Why can't people be happy about those things they already have? They don’t understand how much constant criticizing and blaming affects mentally. All this comes from low self-esteem. Bullies in the school can feel better by putting others down to feel being above them. But why not use that same energy to put ourselves up? In the class, if the teacher asks something and you answer wrong, other students laugh at you. Why? Again, low self-esteem. People who feel being worse than others are always looking for situations to put shame on them.
I can’t understand why learning changes when we grow up. When we started to learn how to walk, we tried to take steps, then we fell down, nobody laughed. Of course not, everybody learned to walk the same way. Learning without making mistakes is not possible. Same with talking, we try to talk until we succeed. Nobody criticized when we said our first words as a child. I am very sure nobody took any courses for these skills to learn them. In school, everything changes. You will get threats if you make mistakes - you will flunk. You have learned your mother tongue by using it, but now you have to do the same with new language by hearing critics of your attempts. Mistakes and failures are sin, in despite of the most successful people in the world are those who have made the most mistakes. School doesn’t definitely coach for real life. How could we learn anything in this kind of environment? I am just asking.
Since the childhood, I have experienced a lot of negativity around me. Always somebody has the opinion of how we should look, act and be. Why can't people be happy about those things they already have? They don’t understand how much constant criticizing and blaming affects mentally. All this comes from low self-esteem. Bullies in the school can feel better by putting others down to feel being above them. But why not use that same energy to put ourselves up? In the class, if the teacher asks something and you answer wrong, other students laugh at you. Why? Again, low self-esteem. People who feel being worse than others are always looking for situations to put shame on them.
I can’t understand why learning changes when we grow up. When we started to learn how to walk, we tried to take steps, then we fell down, nobody laughed. Of course not, everybody learned to walk the same way. Learning without making mistakes is not possible. Same with talking, we try to talk until we succeed. Nobody criticized when we said our first words as a child. I am very sure nobody took any courses for these skills to learn them. In school, everything changes. You will get threats if you make mistakes - you will flunk. You have learned your mother tongue by using it, but now you have to do the same with new language by hearing critics of your attempts. Mistakes and failures are sin, in despite of the most successful people in the world are those who have made the most mistakes. School doesn’t definitely coach for real life. How could we learn anything in this kind of environment? I am just asking.
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