A group of long-time..

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Gaya87

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Hi, can someone please check this sentence, thanks in advance.

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[FONT=&quot]A group of long-time buddies avoid returning to their village every Chinese New Year. This prompts their parents to pack their bags and visit their sons and daughters in the city.[/FONT]

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A group of long-time buddies who have been successful with their careers avoid returning to their village every year during Chinese New Year. Upset and disappointed, this prompts the group`s parents to pack their bags and visit their sons and daughters in the city in hopes of celebrating the auspicious day together.
 
Hi, can someone please check [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] the following sentences? Thanks in advance.

Short summary
A group of long-time buddies avoid returning to their village every Chinese New Year. This prompts their parents to pack their bags and visit [STRIKE]their sons and daughters[/STRIKE] them in the city.

Long Summary
A group of long-time buddies who have been successful [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] in their careers avoid returning to their village every [STRIKE]year during[/STRIKE] Chinese New Year. Upset and disappointed, [STRIKE]this prompts the group`s[/STRIKE] their parents [STRIKE]to pack their bags and[/STRIKE] decide to travel to the city to find out what [STRIKE]visit[/STRIKE] their sons and daughters are up to and to [STRIKE]in the city in hopes of[/STRIKE] celebrate [STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] the auspicious day together with them.
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