A Hindi/Bollywood Movie: Dangal

Gaya87

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Mahavir, an ex-wrestler who is forced to give up his dreams due to lack of financial support. He resolves to train his future son to one-day represent India in wrestling but as fate has it he is blessed with four girls. But when his daughters Geeta and Babita, bash up a group of boys during a teasing incident, Mahavir realizes his girls have the same talent as him. Mahavir pursues his goal of transforming his daughters into world-class wrestlers.

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Former wrestler Mahavir who is forced to give up his dreams, trains his young daughters Geeta and Babita to follow in his footsteps and become world-class wrestlers.
 

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Mahavir, an ex-wrestler [STRIKE]who[/STRIKE] is forced to give up his dreams due to lack of financial support. He resolves to train his future son to one-day represent India in wrestling but, as fate has it, he is blessed with four girls. But when his daughters Geeta and Babita, bash up a group of boys who tease them, [STRIKE]during a teasing incident,[/STRIKE] Mahavir realizes his girls have the same talent as him. Mahavir pursues his goal [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] by transforming his daughters into world-class wrestlers.

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Former wrestler Mahavir who is forced to give up his dreams, trains his young daughters Geeta and Babita to follow in his footsteps and become world-class wrestlers.
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