A Malay Movie, Ballun

Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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Hassan returns from overseas to his village to handle matters regarding his late father's estate and his father's debt to Mr. Seman. He is scorned by the villagers as he is the son of a gambler, and many assume him to be just like his father. Seman is shocked to find out that Hassan is still alive, although was shot along with his parents. Nur Ain, the daughter of the village chief, accidentally discovers the truth behinds the death of Hassan's parents, so she decides to help him solve his problem.

Short summary
Hassan who returns to his village is looked at scornfully by the villagers as his dad is a gambler. Nur Ain, daughter of the village chief, discovers a truth and decides to help him.

 

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Hassan returns from overseas to his village to [STRIKE]handle[/STRIKE] settle matters regarding his late father's estate and his father's debt to Mr. Seman. He is scorned by the villagers as he is the son of a gambler, and many [STRIKE]assume[/STRIKE] take him to be just like his father. Seman is shocked to find out that Hassan is still alive [STRIKE], although[/STRIKE] even though he was shot along with his parents. Nur Ain, the daughter of the village chief, accidentally discovers the truth behind the death of Hassan's parents, so she decides to help him solve his problems.

Short summary
Hassan [STRIKE]who[/STRIKE] returns to his village but is [STRIKE]looked at[/STRIKE] viewed scornfully by the villagers as his dad [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] was a gambler. Nur Ain, daughter of the village chief, discovers the truth and decides to help him.

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