A Malay Movie: Fasting

Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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A group of friends in a village eludes fasting during the fasting month without the knowledge of their respective wives. They who even took turn to get food for each other from the town were apprehended by the religious authority, one fine day as they were feasting by the river. The punishment meted out to them is something they will not forget.

Shot summary
A group of friends in a village who disrespect the fasting month gets nabbed by the authority. The punishment meted out to them has them cover their faces in shame.
 

teechar

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
A group of friends in a village [STRIKE]eludes[/STRIKE] evade fasting during the [STRIKE]fasting[/STRIKE] month of Ramadan without the knowledge of their [STRIKE]respective[/STRIKE] wives. They [STRIKE]who[/STRIKE] even [STRIKE]took[/STRIKE] take turns to get food for each other from the town [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] but eventually get apprehended by the the religious authority, one fine day as they [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] are feasting by the river. The punishment meted out to them is something they will not forget.

Shot summary
A group of friends in a village who disrespect the fasting month of Ramadan gets nabbed by the local religious authority. The punishment meted out to them has them cover their faces in shame.
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