A Malay Movie: Kanang Anak Langkau, The Iban Warrior

Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Kanang Anak Langkau, a Malaysian beloved hero and a brave Ibanese warrior, and his first step in the British Army in Malaya, where he is hired as a tracker. Gifted by an exceptional instinct of tracking, the man flourishes and grows to be one of the best soldiers ever in the Malaysian history. He battles the ruthless communist leader Nam Yat to drive out communism altogether from the country, and sacrifices his own life for the one and only: Malaysia.

Short summary
Kanang Anak Langkau, an Ibanese-Malaysian warrior, firstly grows his army career as a tracker. Amateur but gifted, the war hero then nurtures to be one of the best trackers ever in the Malaysian army.
 

teechar

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Kanang Anak Langkau, a Malaysian beloved hero and a brave Ibanese warrior [STRIKE], and[/STRIKE] takes his first step in the British Army in Malaya, where he is hired as a tracker. Gifted [STRIKE]by[/STRIKE] with an exceptional [STRIKE]instinct of[/STRIKE] talent for tracking, the man flourishes and grows to be one of the best soldiers ever in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Malaysian history. He battles the ruthless communist leader Nam Yat to drive out communism altogether from the country, and sacrifices his own life for the one and only: Malaysia.

Short summary
Kanang Anak Langkau, an Ibanese-Malaysian warrior, [STRIKE]firstly grows[/STRIKE] starts his army career as a tracker. Amateur but gifted, the war hero then [STRIKE]nurtures[/STRIKE] goes on to be one of the best trackers ever in the Malaysian army.
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