A man appeared on the corner the cat had been watching, appeared so suddenly and silently...

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A man appeared on the corner the cat had been watching, appeared so suddenly and silently you'd have thought he'd just popped out of the ground.
Source: Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone, J. K. Rowling

Did the author omit “and he” before the second “appeared”?
 

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Is the usage of the comma really idiomatic in the OP? Any of the options below sounds better to me. "Appeared" starts a different thought and it feels a comma is not enough.

A man appeared on the corner the cat had been watching. Appeared so suddenly and silently you'd have thought he'd just popped out of the ground.

A man appeared on the corner the cat had been watching
appeared so suddenly and silently you'd have thought he'd just popped out of the ground.

A man appeared on the corner the cat had been watching
; appeared so suddenly and silently you'd have thought he'd just popped out of the ground.
 
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