- Aug 21, 2016
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Home Country
- Current Location
Write a short one-paragraph news article.Include the following things:
. a topic sentence
. answers to the questions Who? What? Where? Why?
. supporting details to give more information if necessary
. a concluding sentence
Below is my exercise,please check:
Since Lang Ping as a coach led Chinese women's volleyball winning gold in Rio , her 8 year early experience abroad have been exposed again and attracted people attention.Lang Ping as a team member was a very famous people in China in 1980s. But she went to American to study on her own expense in 1987.It was hard of her initial time in American.She was an assistant in a college team.At the same time she was studying in the college and she didn't pay，but she had no income as an assistant.She spent that time by saving money and under friends help.She was invited to play volleyball for an Italy club team during that time.Lang ping's early and later experience shows some conflict and break between bureaucracy and self fulfillment.So many people was interested in studying her story.It is an amazing tale that people like her always made success in past,present,and maybe continuously in the future.