- May 26, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Home Country
- Current Location
This is my fifth attempt at writing in English. Please correct any mistakes you find.
A snow day
When Kathy drives toward a small mountain where the party is going to take place on, she don’t know why she do. Just a few days ago, she refused attending for the party by telling her friends she had to work on her application, but they insisted that she needed a break and the party is a best place for her to relax. She finally agreed
Kathy’s car crawls on a road to the party. The road makes by tiny stones. It is winding and leads to a small mountain. Kathy has never seen it before. Sitting in the car, Kathy sees two sides of the road is totally white. It was even warm yesterday, but it is snow today and gets colder. The wind is stronger and stronger. Kathy turns her car left to a small road and stops in front of a cabin.
She gets out of her car and heads to the door of cabin. She clocks the door. No one answers. She tries to clock one more time. No one is here. It is eight o’clock, the party must start a half hour ago. She checks the address in her notebook and it matches the one painted on the sign next to the door. Why no one is here?
Kathy hears a sound right behind her. She turns around and sees a young man wears a ski coat. He gets out of the truck and walks up to Kathy.
The man asks: “Are you here for the party?”.
“Yes”, Kathy answers and gives him a question “Is this right place?”
“Yes, but the party was cancelled. No one informs you?”
“ No, nobody knows I am coming”
The man unlocks the door and Kathy follows him come in.
“That is a terrible day. You can’t go out with a snow storm that. By the way, I am Parton”
Kathy looks out through the window. Her car is covered by snow looks like a cake cream. The snow dropts heavily. The recent days, she has to work on her application so she don’t know the bad weather is coming.
“I am Kathy” Kathy says.
Parton invites Kathy to sit down a chair and they begin to talk each other.