After a failed suicide attempt

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Gaya87

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Can someone please check this sentenc? Thank you.

After a failed suicide attempt, Akil decides to contact a suicide service to help him end his life in the most unexpected ways. As he resumes his normal life, he meets a young woman named Zara, and unravels many exciting adventures with her. He starts falling in love with her, but it is not the same anymore when he discovers that Zara has been a part of the suicide service all along.
 
It would be useful if you would describe the nature of the passage. The type of English one uses depends on the context. Is this another teaser for a movie?
Exciting adventures are not 'unraveled'. Otherwise it's acceptable.
 
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