[Grammar] After she was browsing the website that contained videos

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Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"After she was browsing for ten minutes the website that contained videos uploaded from a lot of users, she found the profile of the account that uploaded the video that mocked her.


-You didn‘t had the decency to use your real name, Kelly said.

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[STRIKE]"After[/STRIKE] She [STRIKE]was[/STRIKE] browsed [STRIKE]ing for ten minutes[/STRIKE] (through) the website that contained videos uploaded [STRIKE]from a lot of[/STRIKE] by many users and, within ten minutes, she found the profile of the [STRIKE]account[/STRIKE] person that uploaded the video that mocked her.


-You didn't (even) have [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] the decency to use your real name, Kelly said.

Thanks!
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