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Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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As the mysterious army, the Abyssal Fleet, continues to destroy the seas, only warships that hold a soul, the Fleet Girls have the power to fight back against them. With their new Naval base and the accumulation of battle experience, the Fleet Girls continue to come up with new strategies for their battle. Are they able to win over the battle?

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Set in a world where humanity has lost control of the oceans by a mysterious army, the only hope to counter this threat are the Fleet Girls, a group of girls who possess the spirit of Japanese warships.
 

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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As the mysterious army, the Abyssal Fleet, continues to [STRIKE]destroy [/STRIKE] control the seas, only warships that hold a soul(,) as the the Fleet Girls have the power to fight back against them. With their new naval base and the accumulation of battle experience, the Fleet Girls continue to come up with new strategies for their battle. Are they able to win [STRIKE]over[/STRIKE] the battle?

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Set in a world where humanity has lost control of the oceans [STRIKE]by[/STRIKE] to a mysterious [STRIKE]army[/STRIKE]navy, the only hope to counter this threat [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] is the Fleet Girls, a group of girls who possess the spirit of Japanese warships.
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What does that mean?

It’s like the ability and right to decide exactly what should be done in a particular situation.
 

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Is this mysterious army made up of warships that have a soul?
 
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