A Japanese an animated movie: Doraemon the Movie 2017

Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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To beat the midsummer heat, Doraemon transports Nobita and his friends to a huge iceberg floating in the South Pacific. The group happens to find a mysterious golden ring in the ice. They determine that the ring was buried in Antarctica 100,000 years ago and head to Antarctica looking for the owner of the ring and come across the ruins of a city buried. They travel back 100,000 years ago and meets Kara who is connected to the ring. The group now must fight for survival as they face a crisis.

Short Summar
Doraemon and friends discovered a mysterious ring in the Antarctic that dates back thousands years. When they embark on a quest to find out more about its owner, they discover that Earth may face crisis.
 

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
To beat the midsummer heat, Doraemon transports Nobita and his friends to a huge iceberg floating in the South Pacific. The group [STRIKE]happens to[/STRIKE] finds a mysterious golden ring in the ice. They determine that the ring was buried in Antarctica 100,000 years ago. [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] They head to Antarctica, looking for the owner of the ring, and come across the buried ruins of a city. [STRIKE]buried.[/STRIKE] They travel back 100,000 years [STRIKE]ago[/STRIKE] and [STRIKE]meets[/STRIKE] meet Kara who is connected to the ring. The group now must fight for survival as they face a crisis.

Short Summary
In the Antarctic, Doraemon and friends discover[STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE] a mysterious ring [STRIKE]in the Antarctic[/STRIKE] that dates back thousands of years. When they embark on a quest to find out more about its owner, they discover that Earth may face a crisis.

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