anxiety for more kinsfolk rescued from the earthquake

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kachibibb

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Say, a family experienced an earthquake. A family member was rescued. He waited for other family members to be rescued. He was anxious and worried whether more family members could be rescued.

Please point out any mistake of this sentence:

He waited with anxiety for more kinsfolk rescued from the earthquake.
 

Rover_KE

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He waited with anxiety for more family members to be rescued from the earthquake.

I'd say

He waited anxiously for more members of his family to be rescued from the debris.

Note that kinsfolk/kinfolk are rarely used in modern English. [click]
 
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