'Becoming' or 'being made'

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ColgateSmile

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Hi

I am writing an instruction but finding it difficult to determine which is more appropriate:

'Please warn that any further missed appointments may result in becoming de-registered from the practice.', or 'Please warn that any further missed appointments may result in being de-registered from the practice.'

I would appreciate your advice.

By 'de-registered', it is a term used when we remove a patient from the patient register.

Many thanks
 

emsr2d2

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Please be warned​ that missing any further appointments might result in [your] de-registration.
 
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