better place

[output]

Am I writing the correct sentence by using "better place"?

To make the environment clean, we will have a better place.

 

[emsr2d2]

I'm not sure what you're trying to say but I don't think it's what you're currently saying. Do you mean something like "If we clean up the environment, we will have a better a place to live"?
What do you mean by "environment"? Are you talking large-scale (like climate change scale) or small-scale (your local area)?

If you want to start with "To make the environment clean", you have to follow it with a description of ways in which we can do that. For example, "To make the environment clean, we must all stop using fossil fuels".

 

[output]

Is it ok now?

Too much rubbish in the ocean. We need to take an action clean our environment. To make a better a place to live.

 

[Tarheel]

Is it ok now?

There is too much rubbish in the ocean. We need to take [strike]an[/strike] action to clean our environment. It would make the world a better a place to live.

Yes, it's better now.

 

[Tdol]

If we make the environment clean, we will have a better world.

 

[Tarheel]

The sentence was supposed to say:

We need to take action to clean our environment.

I missed something I shouldn't have missed.