Brooke's life as a singer was too interesting to risk it by having children.

[alpacinou]

Which one is correct?

1. Brooke's life as a singer was too interesting to risk it by having children.
2. Brooke's life as a singer was too interesting to risk by having children.

 

[Amigos4]

Which one do you think is correct?

 

[Tarheel]

Why does one of them have to be correct?

Ask me how I would say it.

 

[Amigos4]

Why does one of them have to be correct?

Ask me how I would say it.

How would you say it?

 

[Tarheel]

@Amigos4
@alpacinou

It wouldn't look anything like the original. Perhaps: Brooke had invested a lot of time and energy into becoming a singer. She didn't want to do anything to put that at risk. So she decided not to have children.

 

[jutfrank]

Number 1.