[General] can you fix my summary?

[julie_loc]

what is the main idea?

what is the main idea?


can you edit the summary by adding some stuff from the article?


In the article, Canada's Health care system is in crisis, and it is going downhill. In our health care system, people are getting older and living longer, but there isn't enough money to keep them alive. There also isn’t enough money to support the health care system. No governments have the money to help.


The article is at: GuelphMercury
Health "crisis" looming Canadian medical association says

 

[julie_loc]

According to the article, Canada's health care system is in crisis. There is no money due to the aging population and rising costs. The aging people are living longer and getting older in our society. The government is ignoring the health care system because they don't have enough money to improve it. The people are depending on the health care system.

 

[billmcd]

According to the article, Canada's health care system is in crisis. There is no money [STRIKE]due to the aging population and rising costs. The aging people are living longer and getting older in our society.[/STRIKE]allegedly because people are living longer and costs are rising. The government is ignoring the health care system because they claim they don't have enough money to improve it. [STRIKE]The[/STRIKE] People [STRIKE]are depending [/STRIKE]depend on the health care system.

A few suggestions.

 

[julie_loc]

can you fix the last 2 sentences?

[FONT=&quot]According to the article, Canada's health care system is in crisis. There is no money allegedly because people are living longer and costs are rising. The government is ignoring the health care system because they claim they don't have enough money to improve it. People depend on the health care system, but there isn’t enough money for medical care or services. Dr. Jeff Turn bull needs the federal government to spend money to create a health care plan.[/FONT]