Can you review motivation letter for PhD?

[MikiMaus]

Dear Selection Committee, I am writing this letter to express my sincere interest in the XXX PhD program. I have review offered research possibilities and I have been very impressed with the opportunities that would be afforded me within your program.
Thank you for considering my candidacy. Please let me know if there is any additional information I can provide.
Yours Sincerely, XYZ

 

[teechar]

Dear Selection Committee,

I am writing this letter to express my sincere interest in the XXX PhD program. I have reviewed the research possibilities offered and I have been very impressed with the opportunities that would be afforded me within your program. Thank you for considering my candidacy. Please let me know if there is any additional information I can provide.

Yours Sincerely,

XYZ