ambitious-girl
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Hello all,
Could you please correct these sentences?
Certain kinds of music can stimulate some negative emotions in youth such as rebellion, violence, aggression and the like. In addition, those who expose to loud music in the long term are gradually losing their hearing.
Certain types of music can encourage some negative emotions in youth such as rebellion, violence, aggression and the like. In addition, those who expose to loud music in the long time might be gradually losing their hearing.
Thank you.
Could you please correct these sentences?
Certain kinds of music can stimulate some negative emotions in youth such as rebellion, violence, aggression and the like. In addition, those who expose to loud music in the long term are gradually losing their hearing.
Certain types of music can encourage some negative emotions in youth such as rebellion, violence, aggression and the like. In addition, those who expose to loud music in the long time might be gradually losing their hearing.
Thank you.
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