[Essay] confide in

[contiluo]

Please help me make the following paragraph sound natural. Thanks.

Hi, everybody! My name is Eric. I am a fifteen-year-old boy. I am a Virgo. I am very happy to be one of the members of EGRC. My classmates tell me that I am an energetic and easygoing person. It is because I'm always ready to assist others and take it calmly when something goes wrong. In addition, I am always an understanding listener when my classmates confide in me.

 

[teechar]

Hi everybody! My name is Eric. I am a fifteen-year-old boy. I am a Virgo, and I am very happy to be one of the members of EGRC. [What is that?] My classmates tell me that I am an energetic and easygoing person. [STRIKE]It is[/STRIKE] That's because I'm always ready to assist others, and [STRIKE]take it[/STRIKE] I calmly deal with the situation when something goes wrong. In addition, I am always an understanding listener when my classmates confide in me.

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[emsr2d2]

I find it a little strange that your classmates have to tell you that you're energetic and easy-going. You could say "My classmates say I am energetic ..." or "My classmates tell people that I am energetic ...". I'm sure you already know that you're energetic and easygoing.

 

[ambitious-girl]

My classmates tell me that I am an energetic and easygoing person. That's because I'm always ready to assist others

Is the following is correct as well?

My classmates tell me that I am an energetic and easygoing person, because I'm always ready to assist others

 

[teechar]

Is the following [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] correct as well?

My classmates tell me that I am an energetic and easygoing person, because I'm always ready to assist others.

It's okay.