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[newkhushbo]

Hello

 

[Norah87]

Dear Adam,
Hope you are doing well. I am Robert from Dubai, UAE. Although my English is not good, I want to contact you. Recently, I was doing a research about USA and suddenly I came across your videos of New York city. I've seen all of your uploaded videos. I liked them all especially the beaches. I'd love to go to the USA but unfortunately I have a problem with my visa which made me feel sad. So, I was thinking why do not you come to Dubai?
Regards,
Robert
(you can add your phone number below your name)