[Grammar] Could you please check this grammar mistakes

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Muhammed Shakir

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Could you please check this grammar mistakes :-
Today i received call from patro he said they are going to discharge him from hospital today. Suddenly they can't do any thing. They suggest him to stay in accommodation and 3,4 days later they will do the surgery. But still he having so much pain. And with out any one help he can't stay in accommodation also with out any one help he can't move from the bed.This situation is very bad and very help less for us.
 
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Could you please check this grammar mistakes?
Today, I received a call from Patro. He said they are going to discharge him from hospital today. Suddenly they can't do anything. They suggested [STRIKE]him to[/STRIKE] he stay in accommodation, and [STRIKE]3,4 days later[/STRIKE] they will do the surgery three or four days afterwards. But he still [STRIKE]he having[/STRIKE] has so much pain. And without any [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] help, he can't stay in accommodation; he is also unable to [STRIKE]with out any one help he can't[/STRIKE] move unassisted out of [STRIKE]from the[/STRIKE] bed.This is a terrible situation [STRIKE]is very bad and very help less[/STRIKE] for us and we feel powerless and helpless.

Hello Muhammed Shakir, and welcome to the forum.
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