[Grammar] PLEASE Check My Grammar - ASAP

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misslily00

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Hello, could someone please check my grammar for the following individual sentences (I know some are incomplete but view them as whole sentences), it's the punctuation I need to be spot on. Speech marks do not need to be included, just need to know if commas are in the correct places etc.

And do we have more or less of an investment case for eBay?
Mushroom tossed with a sweet and sour prawn sauce on a thin-based pizza is delicious.
If you disagree, then jump in because it's much more interesting.
I'm obviously osteoporotic.
I do bits of trimming and weeding, and that's my limit.
Give him his name and see if you can get him some kind of award or commendation or honourable mention or something.
The representation of romantic inwardness provides a context for the means of production.
If you can't drive a car and you have Osteoporosis, it could be even more expensive.
When the doctor came in one day, I said, now I'm so much like my mother because I'd been caring for her.
But I can just register your card for you over the phone if you'd like.
There are two main types of research, qualitative and quantitative.
What they call a candle cut what fits in there, and you can do the arrangement on top.
That we now have the fastest-growing economy in the world.
If you disagree then jump in, because it's much more interesting.
The cleverness of reliabilism is truly rather obtuse in its poetry.
And then I will take all the details from you, with the error page and everything, okay?
I tried to sign that in yesterday, including the full sixteen-digit number.
The expectation for their production numbers next year need to come up.
She says her relationship has her head spinning, Brenda, what’s going on?
Well, obviously not because the plural of formula is formulae.
So everything keys off of that.
 
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1. We do not respond to things like "asap".
2. The opening of your post suggests this is some kind of assignment.
3. It's far too long for us to deal with.

I am going to close this thread. If you want to post again, feel free to ask us about one sentence at a time, tell us why you're doing this and do not expect us to work any faster than we want to. We're all volunteers.
 

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I am opening this thread temporarily just to give the OP a chance to explain:
1- Why the ASAP.
2- Where those "sentences" come from.
3- Why the punctuation is particularly important in them.
 
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The OP having failed to take advantage of this opportunity, the thread is again closed.
 
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