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Nowadays most of the people think that they are ill fated, and life is doing injustice with them. They become more disheartened, when they see others achieving success in the matters in which they failed. The article will reflect the three major reasons that why some people think that they are illfated.

Failure in conjugal life is one of the reasons that leads the people to think that they are illfated. This failure is really a disgusting thing. Problems can be solved by finding the roots and if they proves to be indispensable, one should realize that new beginning is possible.

Another reason that makes the people feel unlucky is the failure in educational field. Students become disheartened when they fail in any subject. In most cases, the students fail in the subject in which they have no interest. To come over this problem, they should select the subjects in which they are interested.

Physical disability is also one of the major reasons that makes the people to think that they are unlucky. The people who are subjected to physical disability think themselves lower than other people. Somtimes the behaviour of other people also makes them feel bitter. However, they should construe that all are not same, there are both good and bad people, both are the parts of society as joys and woes are the parts of life. The disable people should understand that if they have absence of any sense or body part, they must have any other ability that is not present in common people, but the have to find that ability themselves.

So the major reasons that leads people to feel that they are unlucky are failure in conjugal life, educational field and physical disability. The people should realize that the world is so vast. Eveything can be achieved except the escape from death.
 

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Nowadays,[Strike]most of the[/Strike] some/many people think that they are ill-fated and life is doing them injustice. [Strike]with them.[/Strike] They become more disheartened when they see others achieving success in the matters in which they failed. [Strike]The[/Strike] This article will reflect on [Strike]the[/Strike] three major reasons that [Strike]why[/Strike] some people think that they are ill-fated.


Failure in conjugal life is one of the reasons that leads [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] some people to think that they are ill-fated. This sense of failure is really a [Strike]disgusting[/Strike] destructive/demoralizing thing. Any problem can be solved by finding the root of the issue, and if [STRIKE]they[/STRIKE] it proves to be insolvable, [Strike]indispensable,[/Strike] one should realize that a new beginning is (always) possible.


Another reason that makes [Strike]the[/Strike] people feel unlucky is [Strike]the[/Strike] failure in education. [Strike]al field.[/Strike] Students become disheartened when they fail in any subject. In most cases, [Strike]the[/Strike] students fail in the subject in which they have no interest. To [Strike]come over[/Strike] overcome this problem, they should select the subjects in which they are interested.


Physical disability is also one of the major reasons that makes [Strike]the[/Strike] people [Strike]to[/Strike] think (that) they are unlucky. [Strike]The[/Strike] Some people who [Strike]are subjected to[/Strike] suffer from a physical disability [Strike]think[/Strike] may consider themselves [Strike]lower than[/Strike] inferior to other people. Sometimes the behaviour of other people also makes them feel bitter. However, they should [Strike]construe[/Strike] realize that [Strike]all are not same,[/Strike] there are both good and bad people, and that the majority of people in society do not consider them inferior in any way. [Strike]both are the parts of society as joys and woes are the parts of life. The[/Strike] Disabled people should understand that [Strike]if[/Strike] although [Strike]they have absence of any sense or[/Strike] a part of their body may suffer from a disability, [Strike]part,[/Strike] they [Strike]must[/Strike] quite likely have [Strike]any[/Strike] other abilities and talents, not always present in others, [Strike]that is not present in common people, but[/Strike] and they just have to find [Strike]that ability[/Strike] those themselves.



[Strike]So[/Strike] Therefore, the major reasons that lead people to feel that they are unlucky are failure in conjugal life, poor performance in educational [Strike]field[/Strike] and physical disability. [Strike]The[/Strike] However, people should realize that the world is full of opportunities, and [Strike]so vast. Eveything[/Strike] anything can be achieved if one puts their mind to it. [Strike]except the escape from death.[/Strike]
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