CV of a to-be fresh graduate

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yslamac

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Would you please amend and polish my CV below? I would like to have a more mature and concise CV in terms of choice of words and what to be included. The format of the CV is messed up after copy and paste, please ignore it. Many thanks!:-D

INTERNSHIP
June – Sep 2015 Intern, Education Department, Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garde

l Organized and executed a public exhibition with more than 10,000 visitors
l Planned and facilitated a 5-Day summer camp for 60 participants
l Conducted guided tours for various groups of visitors
l Handled ad-hoc tasks in Education Department

COMMUNITY SERVICE AND EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES

Sep - Dec 2013 Social project organizer, CEO Global

● Participated the Developing Leadership through Service Learning Program to self-initiate a social campaign
● Teamed up with 10 participants to conduct a social campaign - respecting cleaners in university
● Liaised with various departments in HKUST to reserve places and materials for booth
setting-up (3-day exposition)
● Explained to over 100 students regarding to our campaign’s mission and successfully got their photos for showing support

2012 - 2013 Sub-committee, Student Social Service Society, HKUST
● Planned and executed 5 voluntary events for the visually-impaired in the Hong
Kong Society for the Blind
● Designed 2-3 games with other committee members for the blind
● Compiled reports about the responses of our served clients for improvement

WORK EXPERIENCE
May 2014 – June 2014 Part-time clerk, Buying Department, ZTAMPZ Limited
● Provided clerical support to a female fashion design company which owns retail chains such as Bread n Butter
● Checked if there is any flaw on the company’s clothing and pack them into boxes for delivery
● Reported regularly to the supervisor for the progress of my work

COMMUNITY SERVICE AND EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES

Sep - Dec 2013 Social project organizer, CEO Global

● Participated the Developing Leadership through Service Learning Program to self-initiate a social campaign
● Teamed up with 10 participants to conduct a social campaign - respecting cleaners in university
● Liaised with various departments in HKUST to reserve places and materials for booth
setting-up (3-day exposition)
● Explained to over 100 students regarding to our campaign’s mission and successfully got their photos for showing support

2012 - 2013 Sub-committee, Student Social Service Society, HKUST
● Planned and executed 5 voluntary events for the visually-impaired in the Hong
Kong Society for the Blind
● Designed 2-3 games with other committee members for the blind
● Compiled reports about the responses of our served clients for improvement

WORK EXPERIENCE
May 2014 – June 2014 Part-time clerk, Buying Department, ZTAMPZ Limited
● Provided clerical support to a female fashion design company which owns retail chains such as Bread n Butter
● Checked if there is any flaw on the company’s clothing and pack them into boxes for delivery
● Reported regularly to the supervisor for the progress of my work
 

teechar

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INTERNSHIP
June – Sep 2015 Intern, Education Department, Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Gardens

Organized and [STRIKE]executed[/STRIKE] managed a public exhibition [STRIKE]with more than[/STRIKE] which attracted over 10,000 visitors
Planned and facilitated a 5-Day summer camp for 60 participants
Conducted guided tours for various groups of visitors
Handled ad-hoc tasks in Education Department

COMMUNITY SERVICE AND EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES

Sep - Dec 2013 Social project organizer, CEO Global

● Participated in the Developing Leadership through Service Learning Program to [STRIKE]self-initiate[/STRIKE] start a social campaign
● Teamed up with 10 participants to conduct a social campaign - respecting cleaners in university
● Liaised with various departments in HKUST to [STRIKE]reserve places and materials for[/STRIKE] set up booths/stalls for a [STRIKE]setting-up[/STRIKE] 3-day exposition.
● Explained to over 100 students [STRIKE]regarding to[/STRIKE] our campaign’s mission and successfully got their [STRIKE]photos for showing[/STRIKE] support

2012 - 2013 Sub-committee, Student Social Service Society, HKUST
● Planned and [STRIKE]executed[/STRIKE] staged 5 voluntary events for the visually impaired in the Hong
Kong Society for the Blind
● Designed 2-3 games with other committee members for the blind
● Compiled reports about the responses of our [STRIKE]served[/STRIKE] clients for improvement

WORK EXPERIENCE
May 2014 – June 2014 Part-time clerk, Buying Department, ZTAMPZ Limited
● Provided clerical support to a female-fashion design company which owns retail chains such as Bread n Butter
● Checked clothes [STRIKE]if there is any[/STRIKE] for flaws [STRIKE]on the company’s clothing[/STRIKE] and packed them into boxes for delivery
● Reported regularly to the supervisor [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] the progress of my work

[STRIKE]COMMUNITY SERVICE AND EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES

Sep - Dec 2013 Social project organizer, CEO Global

● Participated the Developing Leadership through Service Learning Program to self-initiate a social campaign
● Teamed up with 10 participants to conduct a social campaign - respecting cleaners in university
● Liaised with various departments in HKUST to reserve places and materials for booth
setting-up (3-day exposition)
● Explained to over 100 students regarding to our campaign’s mission and successfully got their photos for showing support

2012 - 2013 Sub-committee, Student Social Service Society, HKUST
● Planned and executed 5 voluntary events for the visually-impaired in the Hong
Kong Society for the Blind
● Designed 2-3 games with other committee members for the blind
● Compiled reports about the responses of our served clients for improvement

WORK EXPERIENCE
May 2014 – June 2014 Part-time clerk, Buying Department, ZTAMPZ Limited
● Provided clerical support to a female fashion design company which owns retail chains such as Bread n Butter
● Checked if there is any flaw on the company’s clothing and pack them into boxes for delivery
● Reported regularly to the supervisor for the progress of my work [/STRIKE]
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bubbha

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I would put the Work Experience section above Community Service and Extracurricular Activities, pairing it with Internships, as it is more pertinent for applying for jobs.
 
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