rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi, there. For me, imagination in writing is just like the filter in a fish tank and words and paintings are always a perfect combination for us to use it to provide a snapshot into our minds and thoughts. Would you please proofread the sentences as well as share your imagination when you look at the painting. Any help would be appreciated. Here are the words and the painting.
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Year after year, the sea breeze has dashed sand against the shore to be shattered like my heart.
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Year after year, the sea breeze has dashed sand against the shore to be shattered like my heart.
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