David Beckham changed the match

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David Beckham changed the match
The atmosphere before the match was already heated. The english national team seemed full of confidence and energy to win. However, when the actual game took place, German team scored 4 goals leading the game.
England team looked like they are losing hope for the win.
When David beckham was sent into the match, the outlook of the game was still not very hopeful for the England team. However when he scored 2 more goals, he changed the possibility of the team to win from hopeless to hopeful. When he finally scored 2 more goals making the game as a 4 to 4 draw, the England started to lead the atmosphere of the match in the lead. They finally scored 5th goal, the winning goal! David beckham changed the game !!!




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The atmosphere before the match was already heated. The English national team seemed full of confidence and energy to win. However, when the actual game started, [STRIKE]took place,[/STRIKE] the German team scored 4 goals in succession to gain a seemingly unassailable lead. [STRIKE]leading the game.[/STRIKE]

England [STRIKE]team[/STRIKE] looked like they [STRIKE]are losing[/STRIKE] had lost all hope [STRIKE]for the[/STRIKE] of winning.

And even when David Beckham was sent in, [STRIKE]into the match,[/STRIKE] the outlook for England [STRIKE]of the game[/STRIKE] was still not very hopeful. [STRIKE]for the England team.[/STRIKE] However, when he scored 2 [STRIKE]more[/STRIKE] quick goals, [STRIKE]he changed the possibility of the team to win from[/STRIKE] England's chances suddenly didn't look all that hopeless. [STRIKE]to hopeful.[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]When[/STRIKE] And then when he [STRIKE]finally[/STRIKE] miraculously scored 2 more goals, making the score four all, [STRIKE]game as a 4 to 4 draw, the[/STRIKE] England felt that destiny was on their side.[STRIKE]started to lead the atmosphere of the match in the lead.[/STRIKE] They finally scored that all-decisive 5th goal; the winning goal! David Beckham changed the game!

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