David Copperfield is considered one of the best novels

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1- David Copperfield is considered one of the best novels written by Dickens.
2- The famous navigator Amerigo Vespucci was born on 9 March 1954, Florence.
3- Antoninus Pius was Roman emperor from 138 to 161 CE.
4- Saint Thomas Aquinas was the patronizer for a lot of Catholic universities.
 
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1- David Copperfield is considered one of the best novels written by Dickens. ✅
2- The famous navigator Amerigo Vespucci was born on 9 March 1954, Florence. ❌
3- Antoninus Pius was Roman emperor from 138 to 161 CE. ✅
4- Saint Thomas Aquinas was the patronizer for a patron of a lot of Catholic universities.

See above. I have corrected #4 for you but I think you might be able to work out what's wrong with #2. You need to add a word towards the end of the sentence.

Note that I have changed your thread title so that it includes some of the words you are asking us to look at. I have added your request to the main body of your post, which is the only place in which it should appear. I also put your whole post in the default font and font size, and removed the bold. There is no need to post in anything other than the default settings.
 

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I think for #2 it should be:

"The famous navigator Amerigo Vespucci was born on 9 March 1954, in Florence city."

Please have a look and let me know what do you think
 

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I think for #2 it should be:

"The famous navigator Amerigo Vespucci was born on 9 March 1954, in Florence." city."

Please have a look and let me know what do you think.

Note my corrections above. There was no need for "city" in your sentence. In post #1, you forgot to use "in" before "Florence". Don't forget to end every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.
 
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